video rough cut

We had to change when we filmed as not everyone was available on the dates we planed. Also we had to get costumes and props to help keep the convention of a film noir. When we did manage to film we ended up redoing it because there wasn't enough lighting so you couldnt see the scene. Also when our teacher saw it she thought that it was only of a basic quality. So we decided to reshoot the whole thing. We kept the toilet scene in but cut it down so that it didn't last as long. We also kept in the shot of me looking around so that the audience can see the location.We had a cctv clip of me walking with the leader watching so that the audience can see that something is going to happen. Also as we didn't have very long to shoot it some parts may have looked rushed.